This picture is very nice and dynamic. I really like the colouring on it too and the way you did the hair. The colouring on the lamps look a bit different. What did you use on those?
Perhaps you could look at the guys arm though? The upper arm has more lines going into it. I think you did that to indicate muscle, but muscles do not work that way. That side of the upper arm has two majoy muscle (groups); muscles on top of the shoulder and muscles goiong from the armpit to the elbow. Here's a nice picture (right), just ignore the fact that it is a very muscled guy: [link] Also, when looking at the same arm, the hand looks off. There is usually more room between the thumb and the rest of the fingers and the thumb is slightly longer. The arm of the girl at the bottom looks much better, but the part of the upper arm closer to the hand (and I'm not talking about the wrist) is a bit thinner in most people.
Overall it is a really nice picture. I'd like seeing more like this from you.
Thank you! I didn't know I used too many lines; but I'll look into that. Muscles are hard!! For the lamps I used Gel Pens Silver and Gold...and copic markers Just like everything else It might look different because of the scribble pattern. I did that after the colouring