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I got some suggestions from friends; trying to combine it all in one part. With 5 editors, that's kinda hard... since it's only 2x 175 words. Nevetherless, I want you all to take a look again. I can postpone the DVDburning till tomorrow, but that's the last moment.
The parts:
The teaser.
Assignment: Write a teaser in both English and Dutch, only using 100 words max.
Your help is needed: Grammar, spelling and is it teasing enough?
English teaser:
The story of Naraku continues! On the mystical planet Seken, time seems no issue, but sometimes the past finds its way to the present. Mayonaka, one of Narakus friends, has no choice but to face her past and return to her home and family. Will the reunion be worth the danger? Will she be welcomed? And will her journey even be necessary? Though, Mayonaka is not the only one who has to face her past. Naraku discovers someone is set on killing her, but why does this woman hate her so much? And why does she feel so familiar?
Dutch teaser:
Het verhaal van Naraku gaat verder! Op de magische planeet Seken lijkt het leven tijdloos, maar soms haalt het verleden het heden in. Mayonaka, één van Narakus vrienden, heeft geen andere keuze dan haar verleden onder ogen te zien en terug te keren naar haar geboorteplaats en familie. Echter, is de reünie het gevaar van de reis waard en is ze eigenlijk wel welkom of nodig? Echter, Mayonaka is niet de enige die haar verleden onder ogen moet zien. Naraku ontdekt dat iemand haar dood wil hebben, maar waarom haat deze vrouw haar zo? En waarom voelt zij zo bekend?
Biography:
Assigment: write a biography, only using 75 words max.
Your help needed: grammar and making it sound good
English bio:
Kim (1983) follows her dream to become an author and illustrator. After the release of her first novel she decided to write a sequel. In those two years, she has been working on both this novel as well as improving her drawing skills. She has the goal to not use more words than needed and to let images speak for themselves. Kim is also already working on both part three as part four!
Dutch bio:
Kim (1983) volgt haar droom tot auteur en illustrator. Na het uitkomen van haar eerste boek kreeg ze de smaak te pakken en schreef ze een vervolg. In twee jaar heeft ze niet alleen aan haar boek gewerkt; ook haar tekenkwaliteiten zijn verbeterd. Ze heeft als doel niet meer woorden te gebruiken dan nodig en het beeld voor zichzelf te laten spreken. Ook werkt Kim reeds aan zowel deel drie als deel vier!
Provided by a friend who thought I should be less modest XP But since SHE wrote it, I am still modest myself
English Alt. Bio:
Kim (1983) is following her dream to become an author and illustrator. Two years after the release of her promising first novel, she brings us this thrilling sequel.
More has grown than the story alone. Kims drawing skills have taken flight with images that bring Sekens inhabitants to life.
Kims ambition includes no less than seven books of Forever Young. At this books release shes already working on parts three and four!
Dutch Alt. Bio:
Kim (1983) volgt haar droom tot auteur en illustrator. Twee jaar na het uitkomen van haar veelbelovende eerste boek komt ze nu met dit spannende vervolg.
Niet alleen het verhaal heeft zich ontwikkeld. Kims tekenkwaliteiten nemen een vlucht met illustraties die Sekens bewoners echt tot leven brengen.
Kims ambitie omvat niet minder dan zeven delen voor Forever Young. Bij het verschijnen van dit boek werkt zij alweer aan de delen drie en vier!
Important! Since it's meant to be on the back of a book, it is really important it is flawless! I put my trust in you, so please don't joke about it XD I really need your help!
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As for the teaser, I have one last comment:
'And will her journey...' (I'd remove 'And'
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'Everybody tells me I'm smart, and then I laugh about their stupidity'
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Tsunami -[link]
Serenay Moon - [link]
Kitty Ocean's Boredom -[link]
'Everybody tells me I'm smart, and then I laugh about their stupidity'
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Tsunami -[link]
Serenay Moon - [link]
Kitty Ocean's Boredom -[link]
'Everybody tells me I'm smart, and then I laugh about their stupidity'
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